looking good, Might be fine the way it is, but bit of a coil on the second stage suction line before the compressor would of allowed for excess refrigerant to boil off before returning to the compressor, and not to freeze the compressor with all that cold return.
remember doing a small cascade and having the same problem, just have to play with refrigerant charges to ensure this doesnt happen

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