No need to apologize, first loop is usually a bit rougher than the next ones. My loop has some extra tubing in it as well, I'm just too lazy to clean it up :p:
Here is what I see that you can do:
1. Rotate your Fuzion so the logo is upright, then run to the rad. Cut the tubing shorter by a few inches, you could probably remove 3-5 inches from that run.
2. Shorten the tubing from the rad to the res. Don't do it too much so that it kinks but you could lose a couple inches from there.
That would neaten it up quite a bit :)